Bright idea of teaching writing

 Bright idea of teaching writing
(a) strengthen the highlight of consciousness. Give students a clear bright spot of writing the role and significance of building (see beginning of this article), to strengthen the students highlight awareness. To enable students to understand writing as product, not a selling point there is no bright spot ; test composition no bright spots to get high scores. encourage students to create a bright spot with wisdom, wisdom with bright light.
(b) clarify the highlights of the extension. In the essay highlights a comprehensive understanding of the purpose, may be from a different angle Highlights of the extension .1 combing writing. from the size of the point of view, there are articles covering all the highlights, such as the profound conception; have a local bright spot, turned a deaf ear clear purpose, such as .2. from the process perspective, there are highlights of the early writing, such as selection of unique, there are highlights of the late writing, such as writing a beautiful .3. From the perspective of the article sites, such as the title of bright, attractive opening, the main layer, at the end of delicacy. From the perspective of expression, a narrative (such as flashbacks, inserted Syria , Bu Xu, Ping Syria), describing (such as line drawing, fine description), lyric (such as narrative lyrical, lyrical scenery), talk (such as reductio ad absurdum, reduction to absurdity), and other aspects of the highlights of .4. From the perspective of content and skills, a bright spot in terms of content, such as the rich culture, emotional and moving, with the highlight of skills, such as the color line beads, telling chapter, striking literary grace .5. from a quantity point of view, there are a few highlights of an article; article can be only one bright spot, such as headings surprise move ().
(c) decomposition highlights categories. Darwin says, the world's most important method of learning is about learning. to help students build a bright spot, it is important at the operational level, that is to teach students ways to create highlights. Accordingly highlights the need to create a method of composition, decomposition of each bright spot in the Class. such as Exploration of Highlights can be divided into ; celebrate the spirit of a hero heroic as wrong ; higher than that of text, line and not far. such as drinking wine, an intoxicating; read the article without literary grace, is dull and difficult to swallow. From the psychological point of view reading, writing a literary talent of the people can stimulate the cerebral cortex, brings a strong interest in reading and reading beauty. < br> (b) of the teachers and students to modify the segment, the teacher coaching points.
1. with live related words
(sic) the road on both sides of floating mist, in front of a long trail. a light from the sky radiation over long years after exposure in the trail that scored there, it shines a brilliant light. a string of footprints left in the road in years, I decided to go looking for that person's life that step, heart to find a lined with happiness. What I drift away, I gradually distanced hh
(modified) on both sides of the road with dense white fog, the front is a long, long trail, magic blurred. a bunch of very fine light from the the distant horizon in the long years of the trail project scored there, it shines a brilliant light. footprints sprinkle a road in years, I decided to go looking for that person's life that step, heart to find a lined Exports of happiness.
(coaching) with word of the stack, making the center the word , to convey the profound philosophy and the unique culture, so we deeply love their mother tongue.
(modified) strains of magnificent, bearing grace, simple Chinese told us could be so broad-minded! Communication to our philosophy could be so profound! teach us how not to love their mother tongue deeply?
(coaching) the first two sentences are exclamatory, rhetorical question, after a sentence is. The first subject of the sentence of the attributive constituted by three four-character sentence, neat, sonorous, and give the subject Scholars have written poems are south, are sung south. south of the United States, very chic, very prominent people in mind, never forget.
(modified) South America, whether it is singing, Sheng fire, spring green, such as blue river Wind
(coaching) only poetry to replace them, not only specific, vivid, refined, and skillful.
4. of the ancient poetry
(original) May 16 evening, a little wind. the sky's the moon shining in the river, very bright, very beautiful, cause people a world of imagination.
(modified) This is a benefit the night the wind was blowing, May 16 the tide rose in the ranks quickly. The moon hung in the sky without any clouds above the river like a large shed on the gold tonight, presumably the vast river at the foot of the East China Sea are generally bright with it.
(coaching) is mainly used Zhang Ruoxu of ; Spring tide with sea level The beauty of southern leave Tomorrow, the South's culture and all leave south tomorrow. Once the left tomorrow, it's charming southern United States, will make the ancients, modern people, later years of harvest time and time again resonate with detached and touching.
(modified) it's south to Du, Su Xiaoxiao's south leave tomorrow! it to Liu Yong's south, leaving South Kong Shangren tomorrow! for tomorrow's South is still There qing, sound pulp by Yu Dengying, so tomorrow, the South still Yu, Chairman Yung's tempting screen nostalgia. Perhaps, that charming beauty of the ancient modern people will transcend time and again years later generations gain sympathy and moving. < br> (coaching), WC, and appropriate to gather , gives a rich imagination.
6. imagine the magical imagery
(sic) mother gently patted me about it. without any words, just beat. Suddenly, some unexpected, I seem to tears . a feeling of happiness suddenly flock to my heart.
(modified) mother gently patted my hh I think I cried. that feeling is like a mountain stream meanders through, after the first winter rain , so quiet, so gentle.
(coaching) to filled, striking literary grace.
(c) layout composition.
to In Tile, whenever it rains, will be able to hear the rhythm, then desolately natural rain. grow up, live in the forest of reinforced concrete, can not hear the rain sad, it seems that life is missing a lot of spirit. missing the Zhirou can move people to the weak things, the heart began to slowly desertification. so he missed the rain from that tile roofs.
rain is weak, is the world's most ethereal thing, knock That does not sound thick reinforced concrete buildings. And Tile is different, the raindrops on the above, rattled, and issued to hear. people living in huts close to nature and will have a blessing in the rain. torrential rain, the sound on the generosity of agitation, such as steam ahead; rain slowed down the weak voice, gently Qinru your heart, like a warm spring breeze ears season. tile seems to be set up for rain, they dutifully played with, listen to the rain would diffuse out of the hearts of countless feelings.
when the heart is full of people like to remember and Lament, a man sat still and listen to the rain. The Patriots have grown old , Iron Horse Ice dream to feelings; sentimental poet a to the place he once listen to the rain. coincides with that world, light rain, and heard the familiar and unfamiliar to the rain. misty being, revealing the rain in a strange mood, is the long-lost kind of communication. It refused to I was thousands of miles away, I showed it to my strange, yet I still felt from the deepest sense of the breath of its existence. I have awakened from the dream of a carefree and after the vicissitudes of life through a sense of confusion.
Oh, I was actually in the rain in the similar time and space have been separated self, it is all about my previous. I loss, I ask myself, Who am I? or before that me?
have Word Cloud: , listen to the rain will feel different. But listen to the rain but the dialogue is to listen to the soul, listening to the rush down the truth, Love to listen to the gurgling flow. the rain by the beating, and remove the echo of the years, there are the old can no longer The regret and behaved in a hesitant melancholy. it seems that only in the rain Brisk Tile, the heart was able to breathe, life was able to continue.
rain still sound like my real heart hh
[After teaching Comments]
Confucius said: stimulate the human cerebral cortex, brings an interest in reading, while the flat rigid ear, will inhibit the human brain, gives a hypnotic effect. No wonder some people say: intoxicated; read no literary talent of the chapter, insipid, food is not palatable. will be classified as low-end of the essay, not sub-development level, Li Gu Yi Ran. how to make skillful writing it? 1. focus on image tracing, full of poetic; 2. emphasis on the word with Ci, the performance of expressive charm; 3. flexible use of sentences, to create a lively context; 5. the use of remote association, with a live rhetorical devices; 6. Reference Poetry Quotes, into aphorisms aphorism; 7. focus on spoken language features, fun humor involved. Regardless of which method , should follow the Golgi in the in order to make Xiao; only appealing to people easily accepted.
human give gifts of nature. I anxiously raise money for my mom to go door to door treatment.
Suddenly, a cry of desolation pass my ears. ; I follow the voice to find, turned out to be a little boy.
little boy saw me, tugging at my pants: wanted to pick up him. Suddenly, I touched a bunch of familiar eyes. Hey, this is not Dr. Wang's son? of a sudden, my heart H from a cavity anger, the shadow of Dr. Wang has come to mind. is that he, For a small fee and refused medical treatment for my mom!
sound more mournful cry bitterly cut my knife: it really leave him no matter? late at night, do not let him stay in the lonely field, he not afraid of the dark? He can resist the animals against you? hh I play had a cold silent. ah! not, I can not leave him forever.
I am carrying a little boy and gently knocked on the door of Dr. Wang family. I do not care and attention to his speech, but quickly leave. I did go so fast, not because of anger, but do not want to stay in place this unscrupulous multi-moment.
I am still in treatment for the mother to raise money. I firmly believe: people There must be between the human breath.
tired when I dragged the body into the house, I smell a burst of Smell. I asked my mother doubtfully. Mom just smiled and handed me a letter. letter said: more precious than money is the truth of the probation.
(Review writing features)
Teacher: How do you think of this essay written?
Health 1: This level of clear, mainly divided into two levels, (a ) to .
Health 3: In fact, the real reader is touched by the wonderful psychological description, that , you said in this essay assessment test when the number of points scoring?
division: two types of text to assessment scores, that is, about 50 minutes. However, if you watch highlights of build, it can get better results. < br> Health 5: how to create a bright spot it?
Teacher: cleverly set up a clue, end to end throughout the article.
Health 6: teacher, what is the essay clues? you can talk about you with us?
Division : clue is in accordance with the composition of the write operation rules to put together the content of organically together to form an organic whole carrier. clues, of course, and writes the content to be closely related, of course, should be beneficial to expand the content of the article, the article centers in favor the expression of meaning.
Health 7: What type of clues, including?
Division: General are the following categories: 1. to a thing as a clue, 2. to a certain thing as a clue, 3. to a certain feeling for clues, 4. the time to clue, 5. to place into clues, 6. to a statement as a clue.
Health 8: We have this article as a clue to what is good?
Division: First of all you know, set up with the content of the article leads with the expression of harmony and unity. Hai things students wrote this essay in the evening, the moon can choose to do this thread of the article.
Health 9: Moon, would be delighted United States. just a clue how to do it as text?
Teacher: (After thinking a moment) I would like to use their brains in four places. First the title changed to The final line-free peripheral vision. The moon has not come out, leaving only the sky of the clouds, gently kissing the quiet village.
I frantically running around the village in a narrow Lane, the mood to appreciate the nature of the gift giving . I am anxious to raise money from house to house medical treatment for my mom.
Suddenly, a cry of desolation pass my ears. find, turned out to be a little boy.
little boy saw me, tugging at my pants: go. Suddenly, I touched a bunch of familiar eyes. Hey, this is not Dr. Wang's son? of a sudden, my heart H from a cavity anger, the shadow of Dr. Wang has come to mind. is that he, for a small one document medical expenses and refused medical treatment for my mom!
knife cut me bitterly: Is it really leave him no matter? late at night, do not let him stay in the lonely field, he afraid of the dark? He can resist the animals against you? hh I called cold silent. ah! not, I can not leave him forever.
I am carrying a little boy and gently knocked on the door of Dr. Wang family. I do not care and attention to his speech, but quick to leave. I did gone so quickly, not because of anger, but do not want to stay in place this unscrupulous multi-moment.
children had climbed on top of a tree, with a little breath. I am still in treatment for the mother disease raise money. I firmly believe: there must be interaction between human breath.
I am still in treatment for the mother to raise money. I firmly believe: there must be interaction between human breath.
when I tired body dragged into the house, I smell a burst of Smell. I asked my mother doubtfully. Mom just smiled and handed me a letter. The letter said: home. Your behavior has a mind of my probation, I should learn from you. my eyes a little wet, I opened the window: more beautiful night! more bright month! more choice! between people is more precious than money, the truth of the probation.
moonlight as the gentle flowing pouring down, as if over the song of the music. Oh! months if the situation will sing the.
[teaching post comments]
correct use of writing to pay attention to clues, think carefully before write , when you begin to write correctly, modify the time to figure out. to make the article well organized, clear clues.
clue is in accordance with the laws of such content to the write up organically put together to form an organic whole of the carrier. and written clues to the content of course closely related, of course, should be beneficial to expand the content of the article, is conducive to the expression of the meaning of the article centers. of writing the correct use of cues to pay attention, write to make it clear before, when you begin to write correct, modify, the time to figure out. to make the article well organized, clear clues.
composition meaning (to make emotionally engaging students writing course, but also make sincere emotion, or as Bing Xin said, that love in my home silently convey.
parents always loved me, no matter how expensive, just good for me to buy! to the ninth grade, I began to like to eat a grape, and only in large supermarkets just buy, and expensive. but grapes Well, so he is free to buy it for me. my father loved me.
But, dad will always come back every time you buy grapes and cursed my mother a pass, because there are always four or five ten which is bad. Why not bought a little, my mother, of course angry.
grapes good for me to eat bad food my mom. Every time my mother is full of big smile at me swallowing chewing. because my mother loved me.
then I started wondering, my father not stupid, why every time you buy back some bad grapes? I determined to follow him a few days . the original is not the case: father is really smart. several times, my father bought each of raisins are good, should not be scolded her mother, but when my mother came home, or causes for a father, I saw the original mother's raisin a few more break something. When the father is sweet smile. this for a while, my mother to come and collect the. your delicious grapes, of course, if we are all good, I eat all the bad grapes there, my mother will eat. the original intention of this is the real father, the love between father and mother, I see.
I decided after a good thing to share with family, grapes into two, I can not always be loved, it is only natural that parents pay, I'll learn to love, love my dad Dad, Mom, love all the people love me.
this way, such a quiet, heavy convey my love in the past, present and future, stretching endless, endless.
day I had a dream, the dream is not just my little home in the hands of each person has a grape, the whole of China, the hands of everyone in the world has a raisin.
love to everyone in the original transmission, a harmonious society. Biography
love at home!
(pathology)
(a) Analysis of the main advantages: Through Raisin in the ; of love. The only clue the thing grapes, but also love the image of a carrier. : But, this article is not enough in some parts of the expression of sincere emotion, there is suspicion of affectation.
First, some places are too exaggerated emotional expression. First, the mother bought my father a few bad grapes and angry is possible should not be Secondly, the With Learning nervous, to the ; not care, but deviation from the situation where the expression of feelings. Fourth, straight out of line before and after expression of the poet, at the end of the first said, added to the no. whatever, the most fundamental problem is the lack of depth of writing objects and real feelings or experience, which in some places the lack of true feeling.
(upgrade ideas)
modify the first flaw: to reduce mother father bought a few bad grapes and extent of angry feelings, such as ; me uncomfortable level, such as bite is sweet and sour grapes, endless emotion. Love can be passed in each house a little more all in one pass I love them. The love between the two of them, until that time, I was happy to find that love in my house silently convey.
to the ninth grade, my parents loved me even more, no matter how expensive things, just good for me to buy! I began to like to eat a purple grapes, a large supermarket to buy only be, as far as to say what is imported, expensive. but the grapes good, so Dad is free to buy it for me. my father loved me.
do not know since when, my father came back every time you buy grapes and some always blame my mother, because there are always four or five within ten is break something in the. things are not bought a little expensive, the mother of course, angry friends. good for me to eat bad food my mom, every time I have humility, but her. looked at the mother smiled at me munching on the appearance of large pharyngeal grapes, I am very touched: the mother could be so much love my son!
slowly I began to wonder, father not stupid, why not buy several each time the grapes back then ? that time a careless, was I know. That day, I found my father bought grapes are good, certainly not blame the mother. But when her mother returned home, or blame my father, I see there are a few grapes and break something. When the father on the balcony sweet smile. this for a while, my mother to come and collect old father is so loved mother. I understand completely understand. expensive delicious purple grapes, of course, if we are all good, all that I eat. bad grapes there, my mother will naturally eat. It turned out that is the father's true intent, the love between father and mother, I see.
so I decided, then there is a good thing, a family to share. the purple grapes into two, because the father has stomach problems , do not eat grapes. I can not always be loved, can not be taken for granted that the parents pay, I'll learn to love. love my father, mother, love for all who love me.
this way, so were quiet, heavy convey my love in the past, present and future, stretching endless, endless.
day I had a dream, the dream is not just my little home in the hands of every person there is a mention son, the whole of China, the hands of everyone in the world has a raisin.
love to everyone in the original transmission, a harmonious society.
woke up and found a very good dream, really hope that love will pass in each small family, but everyone in the transfer in a.
love at home, pass!
[teaching post comments]
of nature, society and life experience and truly unique experience. ; the basic meaning: to express the feelings must be realistic and sincere feeling, no additional sense of decorative sense. love to be true, only true feelings in order to impress others, causing readers to resonate.
The second is to enable students to express a deep understanding ; feelings of sincere, lyrical intensity. emotional expression can not deviate from the situation, such as hypocrites deviation is obvious. direct expression of the poet can not be divorced before, to avoid the end of the direct lyrical, before and after the out of touch, not a natural phenomenon.
Writing in the examination, if the teacher's eyes overflowed with tears, why should we worry not score? So, how can Misericordiam? First, the author must be living on an objective that passionate. to write well, must be concerned about age, participate in social, love life, concerned about nature. Also, pay attention to mobilize a variety of mental functions, observe the material world, we should pay attention to experience; in-depth experience, we should expand the association into the imagination, the emotion fully aroused. moved themselves, to move others. Second, it is necessary to express their emotional feelings, but also highly refined concentrated. only to touch the emotional flavor of life, but by no means certain emotional life of the original ecology of play moving. only a superficial expression of a coarse, vulgar emotional writing, can not move people. emotional life taste of life should be refined, is expressive and emotional artistic tension.
shock that was on a Monday morning. As usual, we're going to participate in the flag weakly. twist up.
can not help but complain about them, vanished. We stopped and saw the hands of migrant workers live, a place to stand straight, eyes staring at the flag of God.
a tall migrant workers do not know how to get into my eyes. probably more time to find a relatively flat the ...